Student's Work: Ivy Chang
Ivy worked on a piece of creative writing, coming up with the content completely by herself. She had been working on it for over three months. This is completely her story. All I did was give her a little push and some language support. I am proud of how far she's come. At least this is something she enjoys writing and reading, giving her enough motivation to go on. It is not perfect, I'd say. But it's definitely good enough, in an era when most students find writing extremely monotonous and tiring.
Untitled Ivy Chang (Primary Six) January 2018
In 3017, it was peaceful on Earth. North Korea stopped making missiles. There was no war. One day, on Green Mountain Planet, CA1214 used the telescope to inspect other planets. He saw that the Earth was very pretty, so he wanted to live there. His dad ML0407 was the President of Green Mountain Planet so he told his dad about his wish. After his dad saw the planet, he loved the Earth very much, too. So they decided to occupy Earth. ML0407’s wife RC0815 helped him make a plan like how many spaceships they need to produce to occupy Earth. In that year, they all worked very hard because they really really really really wanted to live on Earth. Their planet was messy and dirty.There was rubbish everywhere. There was only one house in which ML0407, RC0815, CA1214, IC0309, AB1234 and their workers lived. Other aliens had nowhere to live so they just slept on the street. ML0407 always wanted to solve this problem but the planet was too small. He thought if he found a bigger planet, the problem could be solved. Now, he found another planet but he didn’t know anything about Earth so he found a spy who was called AB1234. He sent the spy to Earth and asked him to make friends with the humans and to get information about their military power like how many machine guns and tanks they had.
AB1234 went to Earth and made friends with Ruby, John and Max by hitting them. Usually no one would make friends with someone who hit you but they were strange so they became friends with AB1234. Ruby, John and Max’s mum and dad were the President of the USA, who was called Donald Trump . He and his wife went to North Korea for a visit so their dad and mum weren’t at home.That’s why they brought AB1234 home. They watched TV and played board games. When they were watching TV, there was news about Donald Trump visiting North Korea and the joint military drill’s live telecast. AB1234 watched the live telecast and he knew that military on Earth was very bad like making a spaceship took 12 years. In the live telecast, there was a narrator talking about the military force like how long it took to make a spaceship and how much money it took to make a spaceship. On earth, people needed to use 5 years to make a spaceship but on Green Mountain Planet they just used one day to make a spaceship. After AB1234 had inquired the information, he said goodbye to Ruby, John and Max. John asked him why he needed to go back home. AB1234 answered it was because his dad and mum called him and said they missed him a lot. Back to Green Mountain Planet he reported Earth’s situation to ML0407 who was very happy about that situation on Earth but he still didn’t know how many spaceship there were. AB1234 didn’t want to go to Earth because he didn’t want to cause John, Ruby and Max suspicion. ML0407 didn’t have any candidates, so he just could order the workers to produce more spaceships. Everything was done, the aliens were just training the aliens and waiting for the chance to invade Earth. M0407 wanted to write a letter to humans and tell them to cherish the days on Earth. AB1234 knew how to write in English so he wrote a letter to the president of the USA Donald Trump. The letter read:
“People on Earth should cherish the rest of your life. Don’t do anything ,just go and play. It will be good for you guys.
By Green Mountain Planet’s people.’’
At night, ML0407 delegated AK0103 to deliver the letter into the mailbox of Donald Trump. The next day, Donald Trump opened the mailbox to see whether there were any letters. He saw there was a letter. The letter was decorated with newspaper. Donald Trump was angry because he thought the person wasn’t respecting him and he just tore it and threw it away. After a month, ML0407 discovered that the people on Earth hadn’t had any reactions so he decided to go to Earth by himself and he brought another letter. When he arrived on Earth, he didn’t know where Donald Trump’s house was. He saw everyone using a gadget called mobile phone. Mobile phones were a novelty to aliens and ML0407 wanted a mobile phone, too. He couldn’t steal the mobile phones so he needed to buy it, but he didn’t have money so he needed to work. First, he found a job as a cook, but he didn’t know how to cook so he got fired. Then, he found a job as a teacher, but he didn’t know English so he got fired again. After that, he found jobs again and again, but he got fired every time At last, he found a job as a cleaner. When he was doing his job, he was happy because he hadn’t had a job like this ever before. He was happy.
However, on Green Mountain Planet people were unhappy because ML0407 didn’t tell them he would go to Earth. CA1214 couldn’t find him and he told his mum--- RC0815. They didn’t know why other aliens knew ML0407 had disappeared and they panicked. ML0407 left the planet and worked for two months on Earth. He finally got enough money to buy a phone. He chose the most expensive one which was the iPhone X and he asked his friends where was Donald Trump’s house. His friend told him Donald Trump’s house was on ABC road. Then, he went to ABC road to put the letter in the mailbox and got back to Green Mountain Planet with his new phone. This time the letter was being packed with a coloured paper not newspaper anymore. When he was back to the planet his daughter IC0308, his son CA1214 and his wife RC0815 were angry at him because in his absence they needed to do all the things like ordering other people and signing documents. Usually these were done by ML0407 but when he left, they needed to do all of these. ML0407 was sorry about that, and he took out his new phone to let them have a look. They loved it very much and they wanted it too, so ML0407 ordered the scientist to produce the phone and gave everyone to use. ML0407 said he would give them each a new phone if they forgave him.
On Earth, Donald Trump read the letter. He was very surprised that a alien wrote a letter to him. He thought it was just written by a silly child. Later, he didn’t think about it anymore. The aliens put an application on the letter. If Donald Trump opened the letter, they would know that. The aliens now knew that Donald Trump opened the letter so they started to invade Earth. Suddenly, the sky on Earth went dark, Donald Trump thought it was the solar eclipse, but the observatory told them there was a group of spaceships in the sky. Donald Trump was shocked. He just thought the letter was written by a kid. When he was thinking about how to fight them, China, North Korea and other countries’ presidents called him because there was a group of spaceships in their skies too, they wanted the USA to solve the problem but Donald Trump didn’t pick up the phone. He use the radio to call the people in the USA to stay in the house and to not go out. He assured them that it would be fine later.
Sadly, the Earth lost the war. They needed to do things for Green Mountain Planet People. Donald Trump didn’t want to do the work, so he wanted to make a great army but no one trusted him. He was sad but his wife knew a group of people who wanted to make an army too. At last, they made an army, but they had a problem which was that they didn’t have any weapons to fight Green Mountain Planet.They just had one billion strong people. Luckily, a person called Ricky was working in the Green Mountain Planet Army.He had a map of the army. He told them Green Mountain Planet had got many people but they were very lazy because they thought they had defeated Earth so the didn’t need to fight with others anymore. Donald Trump thought it was good but they still had got many weapons. Ricky said he had the key to the arsenal, so they could steal the weapons.They decided to fight with them on the 1st of March, 3018.
On the 1st the March, they woke up at midnight.They went into the weapon house quietly. Suddenly, Green Mountain aliens found them. They fought together and the aliens called ML0407. They started the Third World War, the aliens didn’t have any weapons as they were all stolen. Humans finally won.